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Renga Tree: Lullaby
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On a quiet night,
Close your eyes and sigh—
In the moment
Before your next breath,
Everyone is there.
Close your eyes and sigh—
In the moment
Before your next breath,
Everyone is there.
My response to *saiun's Old Friend, for #the-haiku-club's 2010 August Renga Tree.
Anyone is welcome to join in and create a response to this poem, or another one in the tree
edited for clarity.
again, this is why i shouldn't fix poems at 2:30 AM... my apologies.
Anyone is welcome to join in and create a response to this poem, or another one in the tree
edited for clarity.
again, this is why i shouldn't fix poems at 2:30 AM... my apologies.
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I like this a lot too!