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Renga Tree: Lullaby

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On a quiet night,
Close your eyes and sigh—
In the moment
Before your next breath,
Everyone is there.
My response to *saiun's Old Friend, for #the-haiku-club's 2010 August Renga Tree.

Anyone is welcome to join in and create a response to this poem, or another one in the tree :)

edited for clarity.

again, this is why i shouldn't fix poems at 2:30 AM... my apologies.
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somnomollior's avatar
I like this a lot too!